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desen
Jan 6, 2008 0:47:07 GMT -5
Post by desen on Jan 6, 2008 0:47:07 GMT -5
Code: Name: desen
Age:1 year
Gender:male
Species:spotted owl
Alliance: great ga'hoole tree
Kingdom: Great tree, formerly in silverviel
Occupation:colliering and weather interpretation assistant
Nest Maid Snake: no nest maid
Physical Description: brown feathers with white spots. Black feather on top of the head. Long wingspan, slightly broken left talon.
Personality: Good leadership skills. Enjoys anything with some sort of action.Stands up to any challenge.
History: born in silverviel, but flew away after hearing the legends of ga'hoole to be a guardian of ga'hoole. Recived a black crow feather by supplying food for the crows. Desen has a historic lineage dating back to the time of Hoole. From his parents, he heard of the great ga'hoole tree and the 1st 2 legends of hoole.
Roleplay Sample: ~ I flew away from my hollow approximately 2 moon cycles ago..~ thought Desen to himself. Desen reached the borders of silverviel to find a forest fire. He thought to himself, ~ collecting some coals would give me a better chance of this colliering chaw ive heard so much about.~ he dove into the flames raging on the trees of silverviel. time past. Desen flew out from the top with 2 coals in his talons, burning one, later realizing he had been carrying a bonk coal.
Picture: none
Codeword: great tree
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desen
Jan 8, 2008 15:16:50 GMT -5
Post by Feather on Jan 8, 2008 15:16:50 GMT -5
1. Fix the title, just put the name of your owl 2. Fix the codes 3. You seemed to have messed up the Occupation part 4. For Physical Description, Personality, and History try to make it longer. 5. Your Roleplay Sample pisses me off. It is a suppose to be a sample of your literacy level, make a piece of writing with your character so I know how well you roleplay.
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desen
Jan 8, 2008 23:18:59 GMT -5
Post by desen on Jan 8, 2008 23:18:59 GMT -5
I apolagize for screwing up on this. making an application is really actually a hard thing for me when trying to rp. also, i dnt know if you ment history of rping or sample of rping, so i dont think " your sample pisses me off" was really nessecary.. anyway, sorry.
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desen
Jan 10, 2008 15:27:18 GMT -5
Post by Feather on Jan 10, 2008 15:27:18 GMT -5
Hmmm. You shouldn't start testing my nerves, Desen, since I'm already in a bad mood. Anyway, you're accepted and no hard feelings.
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desen
Jan 10, 2008 21:36:06 GMT -5
Post by desen on Jan 10, 2008 21:36:06 GMT -5
Thank you feather, so, I guess im weather interpretation and colliering assistant..? hehe..awesome, this i the absolute best ga'hoole roleplay in m view.
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