WIZZARD

[wizzardowl]

Name
I am Wizzard

Age
I am five years old

Gender
I am a male

Species
I am a Hagsfiend

Alliance
I do not have any at the time

Kingdom
I live in the kingdom of tyto
Occupation
I travel across the land as a hire claw

Nest Maid Snake

Physical Description.My feathers are coal black and very shaggy.They hang down over my entire body.
I have coal red eyes. My half hags are like a shadow over my entire body.my talons are very long and sharp. I have a scar over one wing.My beak is very sharp.
Personality
I have a sad tone to my voice .I have a sad regretful attitude because of my past. I like to be alone because other creatures may ask about my past life.
History
Ihave search the lands in search of a place to call home.My mate and kid were killed by a pack of wolves .They were out hunting and suddenly they were attacked.I tried to save them but there were too many wolves. Now I am hunting for a place to call my home.
Role play Sample The sky was turning a dark black in the forest kingdom of tyto.Wizzard started to wake up.His red eyes shined in the dark.''Tonight'' he said to his half hags''we shall explore more of the lands.I must find my purpose in this world.''then Wizzard spread his wings and flew through the cold night air.
Picture


Codeword

great tree

[Skein]

ok, please dont use cap-locks. its alittle bit like you dont really care.
also, could you be a little more discriptive?

[wizzardowl]

sorry my keys get stuck. I'll work on the charter

[wizzardowl]

i fixed my charter

[Skein]

thankyou. now just bug feather to check it!

[Feather]

I don't see many changes done =/
The capslocks are still there, try using capital Is and space the "I am", PLEASE use the spell check, and just add a little more description in the Appearence, Personality, and History. How big is he? How does his feathers look? What condition are his beak and talons? Does he have any scares? Is he intimidating? What's he like around others? Why is he so depressed? How does he see the world? Why does he search the land? Why does he want a home? How were his friends killed? Where did he live before? and the such.

[wizzardowl]

i tried to fix it.i have trouble describing things.

[Feather]

Well, your accepted. This rp might give you a change to pratice describing better =3