Nyra
Hatchling
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Post by Nyra on Sept 30, 2007 9:02:20 GMT -5
center] NameAstrella Age2 years in regular years 20 in owl years GenderFemale SpeciesBarn Owl Alliancegahoole Kingdomgahoole (formaly Tyto) Occupationpart-time-cook,tarvels the owl world Nest Maid Snakenone Physical Description[/bSnow-white chest and face,tan wings with gray spots.Scar on her wing,and a hint of green in her eyes.
Personalityclever,smart,nice,easily annoyed,sometimes stubborn,loyal,silent.
HistoryShe was blown away from Tyto because of a storm
Roleplay SampleAstrella went to the libary and picked out a mystery book.It was a little hard to read,though,because of the events that occured last night.
Picturewww.shawcreekbirdsupply.com/barn_owl.jpg
Codeword
[/center]great tree.
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Post by Skein on Sept 30, 2007 11:50:48 GMT -5
I may not be able to accept, but I have some suggestions for this post so it may be accepted.(feather and honovi, corect me if i'm wrong on any of these)
1: each carrie needs to be in a diffrent post. 2: history, personality, and apperance, needs to be longer. 3: I dont belive hagsfiends are in this time. 4: you cant keep ice wepons in the southren kingdoms for that long, even using the tecniques to keep them from melting.
I'm not saying these carries are wrong, or that you did anything very wrong, I'm just saying what the rules say, and about the history, which is far after the books. I just want this to be a realistic, as far as owls talking and making wepons, as it can be.
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Nyra
Hatchling
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Post by Nyra on Sept 30, 2007 12:08:39 GMT -5
'k. Here's a few things:
1.are you allowed to create a hagsfiend? 2.sorry I kept on saying Ambrilla instead of Astrella,I was going to name her Ambrilla. 3.I'll make the bio longer and put the characters in differnt posts.
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Post by Feather on Sept 30, 2007 13:26:33 GMT -5
um, no skein you got some things wrong. Like, Skein, stop pestering our members XDDDD ;D
1. hagsfiends are from this time 2. as long as it has grammor in it its good 3. you can actually keep ice weapons I'm not going to bug you about that 4. the profile layout is wrong
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Post by Skein on Sept 30, 2007 16:30:31 GMT -5
ok... I will... *wimpers like a dog.* it jsut kindda bugs me if something I think is wrong. but if you say, then ok. I'm going to leave the create a Character you you and honovi. I'm going back to my job. which I cant really do, because we need members o yea, twilight117, if you will tell anyother rp forums about us, I will be very greatful.
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Nyra
Hatchling
Posts: 19
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Post by Nyra on Sept 30, 2007 17:21:11 GMT -5
I will.I know a big owl forum.
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Post by Skein on Sept 30, 2007 19:09:15 GMT -5
thankyou!
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